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2013-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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What I regret to didn’t help other? Sometimes we see disable peoples. Actually I didn’t have any feeling in the old days. I don’t understand the grate needs of the disable. I get help from other but I don’t help oher Can I be of service to someone? Friend say “[이름]” helping someone will make you happy. I hope I can someone help else while i life I thank I regret the they don’t help

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Hi there my graceful [이름]! Sing for those who are in need. It will ease their hurt inside. :) Thank you for answering this homework. You can always help others, it\'s never too late to do so. See you [이름]!^^, ~t. Hannah~ What I regret to didn’t help other?>>Did you regret not helping other people who are in need? Sometimes we see disable peoples. >>Sometimes we see disabled people.Actually I didn’t have any feeling in the old days. >>Correct! OR>>Actually I didn\'t felt anything before.I don’t understand the grate needs of the disable. >>I didn\'t know the huge needs of disabled people.I get help from other but I don’t help oher >>I get help from other people but I don\'t help those who are in need.Can I be of service to someone? >>Correct!Friend say “[이름]” helping someone will make you happy. >>A friend once told me that when I help others, I will be happy or I will make them happy.I hope I can someone help else while i life >>I hope to help someone while I\'m still alive.I thank I regret the they don’t help >>And I regret those who don\'t help other people.

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