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What I regret to didn’t help other?
Sometimes we see disable peoples.
Actually I didn’t have any feeling in the old days.
I don’t understand the grate needs of the disable.
I get help from other but I don’t help oher
Can I be of service to someone?
Friend say “[이름]” helping someone will make you happy.
I hope I can someone help else while i life
I thank I regret the they don’t help
강사 첨삭
Hi there my graceful [이름]!
Sing for those who are in need.
It will ease their hurt inside. :)
Thank you for answering this homework.
You can always help others, it\'s never too late to do so.
See you [이름]!^^,
~t. Hannah~
What I regret to didn’t help other?>>Did you regret not helping other people who are in need?
Sometimes we see disable peoples.
>>Sometimes we see disabled people.Actually I didn’t have any feeling in the old days.
>>Correct!
OR>>Actually I didn\'t felt anything before.I don’t understand the grate needs of the disable.
>>I didn\'t know the huge needs of disabled people.I get help from other but I don’t help oher
>>I get help from other people but I don\'t help those who are in need.Can I be of service to someone?
>>Correct!Friend say “[이름]” helping someone will make you happy.
>>A friend once told me that when I help others, I will be happy or I will make them happy.I hope I can someone help else while i life
>>I hope to help someone while I\'m still alive.I thank I regret the they don’t help
>>And I regret those who don\'t help other people.
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