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학생이 쓴 원문
I always think I can do.
I belive that power of positive thought
If I think I can’t do and it is unchallenged
The life is no knowing
I have the atmost efforts.
I will live a life without reget.
I have be experience what ever
The time is not waiting for you
강사 첨삭
A grateful Monday to you my [이름]!^^,
How are you?>
I can\'t wait to talk to you soon.kkk
Well anyway, I have corrections for you below.
Check them out again for me, okay?
Take care of yourself now and yes, you have to do everything you can or try everything, even so you\'ll have something to reminisce about your past.
So you can avoid negative thoughts.^^
Alright?^^
See you!
~t. Hannah~
I always think I can do.
>>I always think I can do all things.I belive that power of positive thought
>>I believe about the power of having positive thoughts.If I think I can’t do and it is unchallenged
>>If I think that I cannot do things then there will be no challenge for me.The life is no knowing
>>Life then is unknown.I have the atmost efforts.
>>Correct!
Or>>I have the effort to persereve.I will live a life without reget.
>>I will live a life without any regrets.I have be experience what ever
>>I have to experience everything.The time is not waiting for you
>>Time won\'t wait for you.
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