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If I have free and easiness, I used to read saga novels about the history of Korea. I like to learn about historical accidents, related situations and lives of that time. Saga novels satiffy my needs.
However, as mentioned earlier, when I have enough free time, I start to read saga novels. This is because saga novels have long stories and are composed of several books.
Let me introduce my favorit saga novel. "Taebaek Mountains" is my inspirational and impressed saga novel. It's a story about historical surrounding sthat Korea was divided into two countries, South and North Korea. Through reading the novel, I could understand why my country was divided and what Korean should do for the future.
When my son go to a university, I will recommend him to read the novel. I also hope that my son and I will go to the Paektu Mountain located in the nothernmost of North Korea via united Korea's ground.
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Hi!^^,
I appreciate you sending in this composition for today.
It\'s really wonderful to have a diligent student like you.
I really appreciate your effort in doing your homework.
You always have good ideas to bring out.
I wish you and your son can visit Paektu Mountain sooner or later.
:))
T. Lorraine
If I have free and easiness, I used to read saga novels about the history of Korea.
>>correct
I like to learn about historical accidents, related situations and lives of that time.
>>correct
Saga novels satiffy my needs.
>>Saga novels satify my needs.
OR:Saga novels satisfies me.However, as mentioned earlier, when I have enough free time, I start to read saga novels.
>>correct
This is because saga novels have long stories and are composed of several books.>>correctLet me introduce my favorit saga novel. \"Taebaek Mountains\" is my inspirational and impressed saga novel.
>>Let me introduce my favorite saga novel,\"Taebaek Mountains\", an inspirational and impressive saga novel.
It\'s a story about historical surrounding sthat Korea was divided into two countries, South and North Korea.
>>It\'s a story about the historical events of Korea that was divided into two,South and North Korea.
Through reading the novel, I could understand why my country was divided and what Korean should do for the future.>>correctWhen my son go to a university, I will recommend him to read the novel.
>>When my enters university, I will recommend the novel for him to read.
I also hope that my son and I will go to the Paektu Mountain located in the nothernmost of North Korea via united Korea\'s ground.
>>I am also hoping that my son and I will get the chance of going to Paektu Mountain which is located in the northernmost of North Korea via United Korea Ground.
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