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2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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-Diary- I'm indulged in the workout these days. I went to the gym today, also. The more I exercise, the more I want to know how to do workout efficiently. So, I've requested the personal trainer to help me. He's teached me about some exercises for free today. What a such a nice of him! 1. If they hadn't been drunk, the doorman _________. >> If they hadn't been drunk, the doorman would have let them in. 2. If you _________ your last exam, you would have graduated in May. >> If you hadn't failed your last exam, you would have graduated in May. 3. My mother _________ this apartment if she had known it was so noisy. >> My mother wouldn't have rented this apartment if she had known it was so noisy. 4. I would not ________ to see this movie if I had known how boring it was. >> I would not have gone to see this movie if I had known how boring it was. 5. If I hadn't lost my cellphone, I ________ you. >> If i hadn't lost my cellphone, I would have called

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Wow great work today [이름]! I was really impressed. You are really hard working not only with your job but also in improving your English speaking skills. That\'s a very good attitude. You are not simply puttinng new vocabularies in mind but you also use them which very important to be able to retain it in your mind. Keep it up! T. Jane -Diary-I\'m indulged in the workout these days. I went to the gym today, also. >> Correct! :) >> Or I\'m indulged in workout these days. I also went to the gym today.The more I exercise, the more I want to know how to do workout efficiently. >> Correct! :)So, I\'ve requested the personal trainer to help me. >> Correct! :)He\'s teached me about some exercises for free today. >> He taught me some exercises for free today.What a such a nice of him!>> What a nice of him. >> Or It\'s such a nice of him.1. If they hadn\'t been drunk, the doorman _________.>> If they hadn\'t been drunk, the doorman would have let them in.>> Correct! :)2. If you _________ your last exam, you would have graduated in May.>> If you hadn\'t failed your last exam, you would have graduated in May.>> Correct! :)3. My mother _________ this apartment if she had known it was so noisy. >> My mother wouldn\'t have rented this apartment if she had known it was so noisy.>> Correct! :)4. I would not ________ to see this movie if I had known how boring it was.>> I would not have gone to see this movie if I had known how boring it was.>> Correct! :)5. If I hadn\'t lost my cellphone, I ________ you.>> If i hadn\'t lost my cellphone, I would have called you. >> Correct! :)

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