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학생이 쓴 원문
The reason why I learn English is because I want to improve the quality of my life.
I want to work a patisser
I wil be studying abroad in australia
Einglish became the international language that is indispensable for conversing with people from other countries.
Actually I hate studying English. I don’t like to study English.
Why do I hate studying English?
I study English for the reason to answer to me.
So I want a lot of trip in the world and I want meet many people
I hope apleasant conversation to you
강사 첨삭
Hi there my pretty [이름]!^__________^
Yeah, you have to study English if you really want to do more than wqhat you expect from yourself.
I know it\'s not easy, but you know what...
Better to keep on trying than be a quitter right?
Just push yourself, okay?
I\'ll see you soon!
~t. Hannah~
The reason why I learn English is because I want to improve the quality of my life.
>>Correct!I want to work a patisser
>>I want to become a pastry chef.I wil be studying abroad in australia
>>Correct!Einglish became the international language that is indispensable for conversing with people from other countries.
>>Correct!Actually I hate studying English.
>>Correct!
I don’t like to study English.
>>Correct!Why do I hate studying English?
>>Correct!I study English for the reason to answer to me.
>>I study English to know the real reason as well.So I want a lot of trip in the world and I want meet many people
>>And so I want to travel all over the world and meet a lot of people.I hope apleasant conversation to you
>>I hope to have a pleasant conversation with you.
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