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2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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The reason why I learn English is because I want to improve the quality of my life. I want to work a patisser I wil be studying abroad in australia Einglish became the international language that is indispensable for conversing with people from other countries. Actually I hate studying English. I don’t like to study English. Why do I hate studying English? I study English for the reason to answer to me. So I want a lot of trip in the world and I want meet many people I hope apleasant conversation to you

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Hi there my pretty [이름]!^__________^ Yeah, you have to study English if you really want to do more than wqhat you expect from yourself. I know it\'s not easy, but you know what... Better to keep on trying than be a quitter right? Just push yourself, okay? I\'ll see you soon! ~t. Hannah~ The reason why I learn English is because I want to improve the quality of my life. >>Correct!I want to work a patisser >>I want to become a pastry chef.I wil be studying abroad in australia >>Correct!Einglish became the international language that is indispensable for conversing with people from other countries. >>Correct!Actually I hate studying English. >>Correct!  I don’t like to study English. >>Correct!Why do I hate studying English? >>Correct!I study English for the reason to answer to me. >>I study English to know the real reason as well.So I want a lot of trip in the world and I want meet many people >>And so I want to travel all over the world and meet a lot of people.I hope apleasant conversation to you >>I hope to have a pleasant conversation with you. 

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