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Dear [Name], Thanks for your comfort. I hope those accidents never happen again. "Make hay while the sun shines?" I thingk this proverb is similar to my situation. Because I get a chance to study abroad whic is given by my company. However, if I don't get a graduate school admission in UK until December 2013, my chance will disappear. I'll have a hard time until December 2013. This is because I have to get a IELT score and I should get a admission for a short period. Although, the process is really difficult and harsh, I will never give up and I will achieve my goal. For my dream, I say to me repeatedly "Make hay while the sun shine." That's why I don't want to loose the change given to me.

Oh, hi! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for sending it for corrections.   Wow! I envy you. Good to hear that! Therefore, you need to study English very hard. I hope that you will achieve your goal and enjoy everyday of your life.   T. Lorraine^^,   Dear [Name],> Correct!Thanks for your comfort. > Correct! I hope those accidents never happen again.> I hope those accidents will never happen again. \"Make hay while the sun shines?\"  I thingk this proverb is similar to my situation. > I think this proverb is similar to my situation.  Because I get a chance to study abroad whic is given by my company. > It is because I get a chance to study abroad which is given by my company. However, if I don\'t get a graduate school admission in UK until December 2013, my chance will disappear. > However, If I will not get a graduate school admission in UK until December 2013, my opportunity will vanish. I\'ll have a hard time until December 2013. > Correct! This is because I have to get a IELT score and I should get a admission for a short period. > This is because I have to get an IELTS score and I should get an admission for a short period.Although, the process is really difficult and harsh, I will never give up and I will achieve my goal. > Correct! For my dream, I say to me repeatedly \"Make hay while the sun shine.\" > For my dream, I always tell to myself \"Make hay while the sun shines.\'\' That\'s why I don\'t want to loose the change given to me. > That\'s why I don\'t want to loose the chance given to me.