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Dear [Name],
I hope your August will not become black month. My investigation is going well. Thank you.^^
Topic:Was there a time that you felt so down and only music could console your feeling?
Of course. Although I can't play any musical instruments, I like to sing a song,especially when I feel lonely and laborious. As I get an age, it often happens that I can't tell my agony to anyone. When I have to solve the problem by myself or I should be patient, I feel really lonely. That time, I used to go to Karaoke. While I sing my favorite songs, I can relieve my worries and I get a new energy to stand.
Sing a song is a kind of rewards which I give to me. I recommend my method to someone who suffer from hardship.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Once again, you didn\'t fail to impress me with your answers.
You did great with your composition.^^,
Keep up the good job.
I want you to enjoy your August too.
Best lucks for both of us.^^ ~kkkkk
Anyway, I\'ll talk to you next meeting.
Good day and Take care!
~T. Lorraine~c\",)
Dear [Name],
>>correctI hope your August will not become black month. My investigation is going well. Thank you.^^>>correct
Topic:Was there a time that you felt so down and only music could console your feeling?Of course. Although I can\'t play any musical instruments, I like to sing a song,especially when I feel lonely and laborious.
>>correct
As I get an age, it often happens that I can\'t tell my agony to anyone.
>>As I\'m getting older, it often happens that I can\'t tell my agony to anyone.
When I have to solve the problem by myself or I should be patient, I feel really lonely.
>>correct
That time, I used to go to Karaoke. While I sing my favorite songs, I can relieve my worries and I get a new energy to stand.>>correctSing a song is a kind of rewards which I give to me. I recommend my method to someone who suffer from hardship.
>>Singing a song is a kind of reward which I can give to myself. I resommend my method/style to someone who suffers from hardship.
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