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2013-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Dear [Name], I hope your August will not become black month. My investigation is going well. Thank you.^^ Topic:Was there a time that you felt so down and only music could console your feeling? Of course. Although I can't play any musical instruments, I like to sing a song,especially when I feel lonely and laborious. As I get an age, it often happens that I can't tell my agony to anyone. When I have to solve the problem by myself or I should be patient, I feel really lonely. That time, I used to go to Karaoke. While I sing my favorite songs, I can relieve my worries and I get a new energy to stand. Sing a song is a kind of rewards which I give to me. I recommend my method to someone who suffer from hardship.

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Hi there, Once again, you didn\'t fail to impress me with your answers. You did great with your composition.^^, Keep up the good job. I want you to enjoy your August too. Best lucks for both of us.^^ ~kkkkk Anyway, I\'ll talk to you next meeting. Good day and Take care!   ~T. Lorraine~c\",)   Dear [Name], >>correctI hope your August will not become black month. My investigation is going well. Thank you.^^>>correct Topic:Was there a time that you felt so down and only music could console your feeling?Of course. Although I can\'t play any musical instruments, I like to sing a song,especially when I feel lonely and laborious. >>correct  As I get an age, it often happens that I can\'t tell my agony to anyone. >>As I\'m getting older, it often happens that I can\'t tell my agony to anyone.  When I have to solve the problem by myself or I should be patient, I feel really lonely. >>correct That time, I used to go to Karaoke. While I sing my favorite songs, I can relieve my worries and I get a new energy to stand.>>correctSing a song is a kind of rewards which I give to me. I recommend my method to someone who suffer from hardship. >>Singing a song is a kind of reward which I can give to myself. I resommend my method/style to someone who suffers from hardship.

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