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what are the ways to spend vacations wisely? Many Koreans have a short period of vacation. This is because most of employer in Korea don't allow their employee to get a long vacation. Also, they think a vacation is not significant and not essential for their profits. For those reasons, they hate their employer's vacation. Therefore, when we get a change to go vacaions, we should spend our vacations wisely. How can we do? First, do plan well a vacation schedule which is not tight. Good plan can reduce wasting time and efforts. On the other hand, unskillful plan will increase feeling of fatigue. In conclusion, to rest effectively for a short time, people should design well their vacation. Second, spend the time with your family. Recently, people don't have enough time to spend with their family. So, all vacations spending with family are really precious and valuable wherther the plan is good or not. Overall, well planned vacations spending with family are the best.

Hi!!   Happy Friday to you!Wow! Very well said. Again, I totally agree with your ideas. I understand that Koreans are really strict when it comes to work. However, spending vacations with your family is very important especially for people working like us .:))Anyway, you did great again with your composition. I made some corrections for you to check and study. Personally speaking, you just made my day.~kkkkk   Always, T.Lorraine ^^,   what are the ways to spend vacations wisely?Many Koreans have a short period of vacation. >>correct This is because most of employer in Korea don\'t allow their employee to get a long vacation. >>This is because most employers in Korea don\'t allow their employees to get a long vacation. Also, they think a vacation is not significant and not essential for their profits. >>They also think that vacation is not significant and not essential for their profits. For those reasons, they hate their employer\'s vacation. >>correct Therefore, when we get a change to go vacaions, we should spend our vacations wisely. >>Therefore, everytime we get the chance to go on a vacation, we spend it wisely.How can we do? First, do plan well a vacation schedule which is not tight. >>How do we do it? First, we plan and schedule a vacation very well. Good plan can reduce wasting time and efforts. On the other hand, unskillful plan will increase feeling of fatigue. >>Good planning can reduce a waste of time and efforts. On the other hand, an unskillful/unwell plan can increase fatigue. In conclusion, to rest effectively for a short time, people should design well their vacation.>>correctSecond, spend the time with your family. >>correct Recently, people don\'t have enough time to spend with their family. >>correct So, all vacations spending with family are really precious and valuable wherther the plan is good or not.>>correct **whetherOverall, well planned vacations spending with family are the best. >>correct