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I really sympathize with today's topic. In my case, I realize very late that my major is not the field that I truly want.
When I became 40 years old, unfortunately I could see myself for the first time. This means that I could konw what I like and what I want to be. But, I am going to the way that is related to an engineer and a manager. The job that I really want to be is a physical education teacher in elementary school. This is because I like all kinds of sports and I also like children. However, I cann't change my job because I walked way too many.
Because of my experience, I want to let juniors know how to find the field they truly want.
First, get a time to converse with himself. The more he is a conversation with himself, the more he can learn about himself.
Second, try to express your opinion obviously. Through this expressions, you can naturally know your preference.
In conclusion, knowing himself is the best way not to fail to choose his lives.
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Hello there!
You did a great job for doing your homework. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the given topic. You\'re right! Knowing ourselves better will lead us to the right career. Though you started a career that you don\'t really like, I hope that you\'ll continue to do well.
Have a great day and see you!
T. Lorraine^^-
I really sympathize with today\'s topic.
>> Correct
In my case, I realize very late that my major is not the field that I truly want. >> In my case, I realized very late that my major is not the field that I truly want.When I became 40 years old, unfortunately I could see myself for the first time.
>> When I turned 40 years old that I get to know myself better.
This means that I could konw what I like and what I want to be.
>> This means that I realized what I really like and what I really want to be.
But, I am going to the way that is related to an engineer and a manager.
>> However, I already started a career which is related to engineering and management.
The job that I really want to be is a physical education teacher in elementary school.
>> What I really want is to become a physical education teacher in elementary school.
This is because I like all kinds of sports and I also like children.
>> Correct
However, I cann\'t change my job because I walked way too many.>> However, I can\'t change my job now because I\'ve already gone too far.Because of my experience, I want to let juniors know how to find the field they truly want.
>> Because of this experience, I would like to give the younger people some tips on how to know the field that they truly want.First, get a time to converse with himself.
>> First, they must find time to know themselves better.
The more he is a conversation with himself, the more he can learn about himself.
>> The more they will spend time knowing themselves, the more they will learn.Second, try to express your opinion obviously.
>> Second, they must try to express their opinions.
Through this expressions, you can naturally know your preference.
>> With these, they will be able to know their preferences.In conclusion, knowing himself is the best way not to fail to choose his lives.
>> In my conclusion, knowing ourselves better is the best way to find the path that we truly want to walk on.
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