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Nowdays, K-pop is representing Korean culture to the world. Many of Asian people are enjoying Korean song and are enthusiastic about Korean celebrities. However, popularity of K-pop shows superficial aspect about Korean culture. I strongly believe that Korean cluture is located in a transition period at diverse parts.First of all, Korea has experienced substantial confusion in politics. For a long time, military authorities had monopolized Korean government and policy. In contrast, Democracy party won the power for a brief period, about 10 years. Recently, the president Park associated with military authorities appeared and democracy of Korea start to be confused.Second, there has been a lot of conflictions in society. According to the rash alteration in a variety of parts, old notions are not able to be mixed with new ones and this is causing a lot of conflictions among each generations. Overall, although Korea culture is showed as splendid in appearance, inside of that would be chao

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Wow!^^ Nice job with the homework.

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Korean pop music is really boosting nowadays, that\'s true.

And it shows much when it comes to your culture.

It\'s actually diverse and is rapidly improving since time immemorial.

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Nowdays, K-pop is representing Korean culture to the world.

>>Correct!

 Many of Asian people are enjoying Korean song and are enthusiastic about Korean celebrities.

>>Correct!(All because they so handsome,kkk)

However, popularity of K-pop shows superficial aspect about Korean culture.

>>Correct!^^

 I strongly believe that Korean cluture is located in a transition period at diverse parts.

>>I strongly believe  that Korean culture nowadays is having a transitional period in every part of such.

First of all, Korea has experienced substantial confusion in politics.

>>Correct!

For a long time, military authorities had monopolized Korean government and policy.

>>Correct!

 In contrast, Democracy party won the power for a brief period, about 10 years.

>>Correct!

OR>>On the other hand, democratic party has been on top for about 10 years already.

Recently, the president Park associated with military authorities appeared and democracy of Korea start to be confused.

>>Recently, President Park associated with that of the military authorities which led to the confusion of Korea as a democratic country.

Second, there has been a lot of conflictions in society.

>>Secondly, There has been a lot of conflicts in our society.

 According to the rash alteration in a variety of parts, old notions are not able to be mixed with new ones and this is causing a lot of conflictions among each generations.
>>Correct!

Or>>According to some research, old notions must never be combined with new ones since this will leade to more conflicts among the society.

Overall, although Korea culture is showed as splendid in appearance, inside of that would be chao

>>Overall, Korea may seem splendid when it comes to culture, but inside, there\'s chaos as well.