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How should one acquire a friend?
"A man is known by the company he keeps". This means that people can be evaluated by their friends since most people would get together with friends who are similar with them. In addition, friends have affected each other whether it is good or not. Thus, keeping good company is really important, especially to teenagers.
Then, how can we obtain good friends? I think people should first set a standard of life. If they meet a person who deviate from their standard. people should avoid from making a friend. In my case, even though one is really attractive and many people want to get together with him, if his manner is not good or he doesn't have a proper mind, I will not make him my freind. This is because his inappropriate attitude and manner is not harmonied with my thoughts.
In conclusion, to meet a good friend, people should establish their own principle of life.
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