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The things that makes a person feel fulfilled. There are a lot of things that make people feel fulfilled. Most people have their special things that satisfy them. In my case, I have two things that make me feel fulfilled. Firstly, when I try to achieve certain goals, I feel fulfilled. For example, when I finished the really significant and difficult investigation about the accident happend in the constructin site or when I found out my struggling to reach the goals such as studying by moonlight, working hard and so on, I am proud of myself. Secondly, whenever I see my children's smile, I sincerely feel fulfilled. This is because I believe my children is growing up well under my looking after and I am offering them good circumstances. Nowdays, I work hard to get a IELTS score and spend many time to take care of my one year daughter. Although, I sometimes feel tired, those things make me refresh and give me energy to get up again

Thanks for this^^   I really feel happy when I was reading your answer. As your teacher, knowing these things from you makes me feel proud of you as my student. Keep up the good work and keep up that inspiration in you because in time you would really become happy^^   Teacher Hannah^^   The things that makes a person feel fulfilled.>>The things that make a person feel fulfilled.There are a lot of things that make people feel fulfilled. >>Correct Most people have their special things that satisfy them. >>Correct In my case, I have two things that make me feel fulfilled.>>CorrectFirstly, when I try to achieve certain goals, I feel fulfilled. >>Correct For example, when I finished the really significant and difficult investigation about the accident happend in the constructin site or when I found out my struggling to reach the goals such as studying by moonlight, working hard and so on, I am proud of myself.>>Correct (Spelling check: construction^^)Secondly, whenever I see my children\'s smile, I sincerely feel fulfilled. >>Correct This is because I believe my children is growing up well under my looking after and I am offering them good circumstances.>>This is because I believe my children are growing up well under my supervision and I am offering them good circumstances.Nowdays, I work hard to get a IELTS score and spend many time to take care of my one year daughter. >>Nowdays, I work hard to get a good IELTS score and spend many times to take care of my one year  old daughter. Although, I sometimes feel tired, those things make me refresh and give me energy to get up again >>Correct^^