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2013-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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Last Thursday morning, I should attend the meeting abruptly. So, I couldn't receive your call. It was unusual to start meeting at 08:30. Anyway, I'm sorry. Topic : What are the things that you consider in improving your way of life. Most people will hope better life than theri present. However, a lot ot people couldn't achieve their goals. This is because they might miss two things to improve their way of life. First of all, people should determine their goal of life. Althoug it takes many time, people should do. After setting their goals, people can amass the informantions related to the goals and find the approprite way to attain their dreams. Secondly, if people decide on their way of life and collect the informations, they shoud effort to accomplish their dream. Most of all, continous endeavour is the best requirement. During this process, people will confront tremendous challenges and difficulties. They also should not be frustrated with and should overcome.

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Hi there Mr. [Name]!^______^ Thank you for answering the homewrok I gave you. Yes, you have to face a lot of obstacles when you want to reach for something but one must never give up, right? He os she needs to push forward and not backwards or else there will be no more turning back. Take care of yourself now! And about last Thursday, I understand. Don\'t worry,kkk.^^ See you tomorrow! ~t. Hannah~ Last Thursday morning, I should attend the meeting abruptly. >>Correct@!^^ So, I couldn\'t receive your call. >>Correct! OR>>So I wasn\'t able to answer your call.  It was unusual to start meeting at 08:30. >>Correct! Anyway, I\'m sorry.>>Correct!Topic : What are the things that you consider in improving your way of life.Most people will hope better life than theri present. >>Most people hoes for a better life than what they have now. However, a lot ot people couldn\'t achieve their goals. >>Correct! This is because they might miss two things to improve their way of life.>>Correct!First of all, people should determine their goal of life. >>Correct! Althoug it takes many time, people should do. >>Altough it takes a lot of time to do so, they still have to achieve it.  After setting their goals, people can amass the informantions related to the goals and find the approprite way to attain their dreams. >>Correct!Secondly, if people decide on their way of life and collect the informations, they shoud effort to accomplish their dream. >>Secondly, in doing such, they have to have an effort to accomplish what they want. Most of all, continous endeavour is the best requirement. >>Correct! During this process, people will confront tremendous challenges and difficulties. >>Correct! They also should not be frustrated with and should overcome. >>They should not be frustrated in the process but must overcome all the difficulties that come their way.

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