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Have you ever felt so alone and tired of everything?
I have not been able to feel alone while I have felt tired everyday, since I have been really busy nowdays.
However, when I was in military service, I experienced that feelings. Especially, during a private, I was significantly sick due to flu. In general, Korean soilders are enforced to overcome their body and mind problems. Because of this custom, I couldn't be treated and attended the dicipline. That time, I felt so alone and really missed my family. Thus, I don't really want to recall the period of my military service.
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Hello there^^
I felt sad because of what happened to you. But I am so proud of you
because you were able to endure and surpass that time. Though
you don\'t want to remember that I know that your time there has a part of who you are
right now^^
Thanks for this and see you in class^^
T.Hannah
Have you ever felt so alone and tired of everything?I have not been able to feel alone while I have felt tired everyday, since I have been really busy nowdays.>>Correct
>>OR: I have never felt alone and tired since I have been really busy nowadyas.However, when I was in military service, I experienced that feelings.>>However, when I was in the military service , I had experienced that feeling.
Especially, during a private, I was significantly sick due to flu.
>>Especially, when I was a private, I was so sick due to flu.
In general, Korean soilders are enforced to overcome their body and mind problems.
>>Correct
Because of this custom, I couldn\'t be treated and attended the dicipline. >>Because of this custom, I couldn\'t be treated so I bore the pain.
That time, I felt so alone and really missed my family.
>>Correct
Thus, I don\'t really want to recall the period of my military service. >> Correct
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