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When it comes to important things, I think the attitude between people is more sighnificant rather than certain materials. I don't like people's rude attitude. I also believe good manner is needed to contemporary people. Nowdays, as the world is rpaidly changed and becomes more and more complex, people become easily angry and loose their temper frequently. Although people confront these situations, if they keep or sustain their good manner, anger between people will disappear. To do so, people should have been educated from their childhood about good manner, attitude and consideration to other people. However, unfortunately, our education system couldn't have provided these morals education and have pushed continously students in competition. In addition, parents couldn't have instructed right morals to their children. This is because they also have been affected by social atmosphere that the win of competition is the most important. Nevertheless, I will teach my children morals.

Hello there Mr. [Name]!^^ You are very much correct with your answer. Society\'s way of thinking nowadays is very much different unlike before. They are actually dragging children to become the best and not a mediocre. Well anyway, it\'s good to know that you will teach your children how to be good people.kkk See you Mr. [Name]! Check out my corrections.^^ ~t. Hannah~ When it comes to important things, I think the attitude between people is more sighnificant rather than certain materials. >>Correct!  I don\'t like people\'s rude attitude. >>Correct! OR>>I don\'t like people who are rude.  I also believe good manner is needed to contemporary people. >>Correct! OR>>I also believe that good manner and right conduct is needed nowadays. Nowdays, as the world is rpaidly changed and becomes more and more complex, people become easily angry and loose their temper frequently. >>As the world becomes rapidly changed and becomes more complex, people are easily agnered and are short-tempered. Although people confront these situations, if they keep or sustain their good manner, anger between people will disappear. >>Correct! To do so, people should have been educated from their childhood about good manner, attitude and consideration to other people. >>Inorder to achieve such, people must be educated starting from their childhood onwards in considering other people\'s emotions as well. However, unfortunately, our education system couldn\'t have provided these morals education and have pushed continously students in competition >>However, education cannot teach one how to have good moral characteristics and the like since they push students to compete with one another. . In addition, parents couldn\'t have instructed right morals to their children. >>In addition, parents couldn\'t instruct or teach even how to have these good moral characteristics.  This is because they also have been affected by social atmosphere that the win of competition is the most important. >>This is because they\'re influenced by our present way of thinking that winning is the main goal and nothing more.Nevertheless, I will teach my children morals. >>Nevertheless, I will teach my children how to have good moral characteristics in and out of our home.