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What can you say about young people who are taking drugs at a very young age. Drugs have not appeared yet to socail problems in Korea. However, some people sucha as high-ranking officials or celebrities may be taking drugs and it is not revealed frequently to public. When the fact that some celebrities have taken drugs is revealed, it causes tremendous social issue. Anyway, The fact that young people are taking drugs shows eminently that the country's social system has serious problems. Therefore, adults have an effort to develop social systems that could prevent young people from taking drugs and could take care of the person who is addicted by drugs.

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What can you say about young people who are taking drugs at a very young age.
Drugs have not appeared yet to socail problems in Korea.

>>Drugs is not yet a social problem in Korea. 

However, some people sucha as high-ranking officials or celebrities may be taking drugs and it is not revealed frequently to public.

>>However, some people such as high-ranking officials or celebrities might be taking drugs and it is not frequently being revealed to the public.

When the fact that some celebrities have taken drugs is revealed, it causes tremendous social issue.
>>As a matter of fact, some celebrities were revealed that they have taken some drugs. and it caused a tremendous social issue.
Anyway, The fact that young people are taking drugs shows eminently that the country\'s social system has serious problems.

>>CORRECT!

Therefore, adults have an effort to develop social systems that could prevent young people from taking drugs and could take care of the person who is addicted by drugs.

>>Therefor, adults should effort to develop social system that could prevent youth from taking drugs and a system that could take care of the person who is addicted with drugs.