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Whenever the Korean government has changed, the policy of education has also fluctuated. This continuous change of educational system has caused tremendous confusion to students and their parents. I think the problem of Korea's educational system is based on social unbalance of wealth fundamently. Good jobs which offer people a lot of salary and a regular work are confined. It means that the number of good jobs is relatively deficient and the companies that give students good jobs claim high qualifications such as graduation from high-class university to students. For those reasons, most parents in Korea hope that their children enter the high-class university and push them into infinite competition. In addition, parents focus on the change of educational system and sometimes affect the education policy to be profitable to their children. These phenomenon is the result of overheated competition. To slove these educational problems, Korean government should try to enhance their

Hi there Mr. [Name]!^____^ How are you? I have my corrections for you below. You have very good ideas in mind. I very much appreciate you ding all the homework.kkk Thank you.. Well anyway, I have corrections for you please check them out! See you on Monday sir William. I hope you\'ll enjoy your weekend. ~t. Hannah~ Whenever the Korean government has changed, the policy of education has also fluctuated. >>Whenever Korean government changes, educational system does the same. This continuous change of educational system has caused tremendous confusion to students and their parents.>>Correct!^____^I think the problem of Korea\'s educational system is based on social unbalance of wealth fundamently. >>I think the problem with Korea\'s eduactional system is actally based on unbalanced social wealth. Good jobs which offer people a lot of salary and a regular work are confined. >>Correct!  It means that the number of good jobs is relatively deficient and the companies that give students good jobs claim high qualifications such as graduation from high-class university to students.>>Correct! OR>>It means that a number of good jobs are relatively deficient and that companies nowadays give students better jobs that have high qualifications.For those reasons, most parents in Korea hope that their children enter the high-class university and push them into infinite competition. >>Correct!  In addition, parents focus on the change of educational system and sometimes affect the education policy to be profitable to their children. >>Correct!  These phenomenon is the result of overheated competition.>>Correct!^^To slove these educational problems, Korean government should try to enhance their >>To solve this problem, Korean government should make rules that would actually help the school and the students alike in doing well with international competition and everything else under the sun.