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long time no see^^
I couldn't do my homework because I was busy to prepare for IELTS test.
Anyway, thanks for your concern.
Today' topic : What can you say about South Korea and North Korea's present relationship.
The fact that Korea is separated to South and North korea is a tremendous tragedy. The time divided to two has already passed over about 60 years. In addition, the relationship between South Korea and North Korea hasn't been good and each idelogies has been different: South Korea adopted democracy and North Korea received communism. Moreover, periphery nations like China, Japan and America haven't allowed united Korea.
To overcome these barriers, Korea should raise national power and expand civilian exchanges.
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A happy Tuesday to you sir William!^^
Wow you have a good answer it.
Actually, I completely agree with you.
Eversince, there are a lot of countries intervening with your situation.
Anyway, let\'s just hope for the best then.^^
See you sir William!
~t. Hannah~
long time no see^^
>>Correct!I couldn\'t do my homework because I was busy to prepare for IELTS test.
>>Correct!
OR>>I wasn\'t able to do my homework because I was so busy preparing for IELTS test.Anyway, thanks for your concern.>>Correct!Today\' topic : What can you say about South Korea and North Korea\'s present relationship.The fact that Korea is separated to South and North korea is a tremendous tragedy.
>>Correct!
OR>>The fast that Korea is divided into two is a tremendous tragedy.
The time divided to two has already passed over about 60 years.
>>The time that\'s it\'s been divded into two is over 60 years already.
In addition, the relationship between South Korea and North Korea hasn\'t been good and each idelogies has been different: South Korea adopted democracy and North Korea received communism.
>>Correct!
Moreover, periphery nations like China, Japan and America haven\'t allowed united Korea. >>Moreover, periphery nations usch as China and the like never wanted to unite South and North Korea.To overcome these barriers, Korea should raise national power and expand civilian exchanges. >>Correct!
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