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Cite the differences between a Korean father and a mother with foreign fathers and mothers.
I don't know about the notions, habits and behaviors of foreign parents. Thus, I cann't explain the differences with Korean parents. However, I can explain Korean parents habits and tendency.
Since Korea society has tremendous competitions and full-time jobs are limited, many parents enforce their children to study well and to enter the top-class university that could allow to get a good job. Unfortunately, in this process, the dreams of children frequently are neglected.
Theseday, the new tendency is being revealed. Some parents started to respect their children's hope and dream as well as help their children to find and reach the goals. This is because they may realize childen's happiness is the most important.
However, I strongly believe that as long as Korean government's efforts which improve social problems are not followed, this new tendency couldn't be expanded.
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Happy Thanksgiving Mr. William!^___________^
I think you are correct with your answer.kk
I completekly agree with you in this one.
Good job for having such observation.kk
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~t. Hannah~
Cite the differences between a Korean father and a mother with foreign fathers and mothers.I don\'t know about the notions, habits and behaviors of foreign parents.
>>Correct!
Thus, I cann\'t explain the differences with Korean parents.
>>Thuis, I can\'t explain about the differences between foreign parents and those from Korean ones.
However, I can explain Korean parents habits and tendency.
>>Correct!
Since Korea society has tremendous competitions and full-time jobs are limited, many parents enforce their children to study well and to enter the top-class university that could allow to get a good job.
>>Correct!
Since Korea society has tremendous competitions and full-time jobs are limited, many parents enforce their children to study well and to enter the top-class university that could allow to get a good job.
>>Correct!
Unfortunately, in this process, the dreams of children frequently are neglected.
>>Correct!
Theseday, the new tendency is being revealed.
>>Correct!
Theseday, the new tendency is being revealed.
>>Correct!OR>>These the days, a new trend or culture can be seen.
Some parents started to respect their children\'s hope and dream as well as help their children to find and reach the goals.
>>Correct!
This is because they may realize childen\'s happiness is the most important.
>>Correct!
However, I strongly believe that as long as Korean government\'s efforts which improve social problems are not followed, this new tendency couldn\'t be expanded.
>>Correct!
However, I strongly believe that as long as Korean government\'s efforts which improve social problems are not followed, this new tendency couldn\'t be expanded.
>>However, I strongly believe that as long as the Korean government continue to deprive these dreams of young people, then having such cannot be practiced much.
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