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Hi there!
I think changing one\'s attitude doesn\'t need to be done fast. It needs to be done slowly so you can really know other things about yourself.
It\'s a matter of self-reflection at the same time, doing something about your weaknesses.
We change the bad behavior we have so we can be a better person but never change it because other people ask you to do.
If you have questions about the corrections, feel free to ask them in class.
Take care!^.^
~~T. Maria^^
What is the one feature you would change about yourself and why?
I so hasty, so I really want to change my bad feature.
>>I am so hasty [haughty], so I really want to change my bad feature.
I think that is so bad personality.
>>I think that it is a bad thing in my personality.
or>> I think that is a bad attitude.
When I was a middle school student,I got a test but because of my feature my test was failed.
>>When I was in middle school/when I was a middle school student, I took a test and failed because of my bad feature.
Nowadays I\'m working as an assistant.
>>Correct.
It need some attitude that meticulous.
>>It needs some meticulous attitude.
However my feature is not suit this job.
>>However, my feature is not suitable for this job.
That\'s why I leave my job and than will go to Austraila.
>>That\'s why I will leave/quit my job and then will go to Australia.^^
I\'m efforting fix my weakness that write dairy everyday or think about task that I have to do each time.
>>I\'m exerting effort to fix my weakness by writing a diary everyday or thinking about the task that I have to do each/every time.
But I can\'t fix my feature well and fast. How can I do that to change my weakness?
>>But I can\'t fix/change my feature well and fast. How can I change my weakness?^^
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