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2013-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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1. Don't press the 'submit' button before completion of all 10 sentences. 2. Don't press the 'submit' button until you're completely finished with these 10 sentences. 3. I don't know where I'm going on my vacation. I haven't finalized my plans yet. 4.This is my final vacation plan: I'm going to San Francisco for a week. 5.You can buy excellent rye bread in that bakery . 6.No, I'm not sick . I'm just feeling very tired right now. 7.No, I don't like her perfume. It smells sick sweet to me. 8.I think Dave's been working too hard. I'm sure he'll feel rejuvenating after his vacation, however. 9.I think Dave's been working too hard. I hope his vacation will be rejuvenated for him. 10.I think Dave's been working too hard. I hope his vacation will give him the rejuvenation that I think he needs.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

You almost got it all correctly. Anyway, here are some of the corrections.

Hope you\'ll have time to go over it.^^ 

Have a great day!

~t. Maria~

1. Don\'t press the \'submit\' button before completion of all 10 sentences.

>> Correct!
2. Don\'t press the \'submit\' button until you\'re completely finished with these 10 sentences.
>> Correct!

3. I don\'t know where I\'m going on my vacation. I haven\'t finalized my plans yet.

>> Correct!
4.This is my final vacation plan: I\'m going to San Francisco for a week.

>> Correct!
5.You can buy excellent rye bread in that bakery .

>> Correct!
6.No, I\'m not sick . I\'m just feeling very tired right now.

>> Correct!
7.No, I don\'t like her perfume. It smells sick sweet to me.

>> No, I don\'t like her perfume. It smells sickly sweet to me.
8.I think Dave\'s been working too hard. I\'m sure he\'ll feel rejuvenating after his vacation, however.

>> I think Dave\'s been working too hard. I\'m sure he\'ll feel rejuvenated after his vacation, however.
9.I think Dave\'s been working too hard. I hope his vacation will be rejuvenated
for him.

>> I think Dave\'s been working too hard. I hope his vacation will be rejuvenating
for him.
10.I think Dave\'s been working too hard. I hope his vacation will give him the rejuvenation that I think he needs.

>> Correct!

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