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2013-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Dear Teacher Isabel, Yes, It is important to gain success to consider every condition carefully and prepare for purpose well, especially for work. I will keep in mind what you wrote to me in message and try to be the person who is always well-prepared. To do that, I try not to be behind my home work. Sorry. Best Regards, [이름] Ps. And come to think of it, there is one thing which is always good on ‘going with the flow’. It is a person’s emotion like a love. when we follow our heart and be honest about our feelings whether it is good or bad, we can go next steps to make situation and relationship better and over come the mental barrier. <Home work> 1. Not all of the children went outside. Some of them stayed in the classroom. 2. I have to go to the supermarket. There isn't much coffee left. 3. How many loaves of bread do we need? 4. Would you like any milk? Yes please. Just a little. 5.The land is not suitable for agriculture so some of the food is imported.

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Hello there again Ms. [이름]! :) Wow! You\'re making up for those late homework. :) I want to commend you for your great effort. :) I do agree with you, being spontaneous is a charming character. But I think it should be still in balance, right? It\'s good to enjoy the life and go with the flow. But as the same time, fulfilling your responsibilities and working efficiently, right? :) Me too, I try to be prepared as much as possible. But still, there are things that we couldn\'t control. :) Anyway, I hope you\'re now home safely. :) Have a great night and talk to you tomorrow! :) Be happpy and smile always! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Dear Teacher Isabel, >>Correct!Yes, It is important to gain success to consider every condition carefully and prepare for purpose well, especially for work. >>Yes, it is important that to gain success, we must consider every condition carefully and prepare for a purpose as well, especially for work. I will keep in mind what you wrote to me in message and try to be the person who is always well-prepared. >>I will keep in mind what you wrote to me in your message and try to be the person who is always well-prepared.  To do that, I try not to be behind my home work. >>Correct!  Sorry.>>Correct!Best Regards,[이름]>>Correct!Ps. And come to think of it, there is one thing which is always good on ‘going with the flow’. >>Correct!  It is a person’s emotion like a love. >>DID YOU MEAN: It\'s like the emotion of a person who\'s in love.when we follow our heart and be honest about our feelings whether it is good or bad, we can go next steps to make situation and relationship better and over come the mental barrier. >>Correct!<Home work>1. Not all of the children went outside. Some of them stayed in the classroom. >>Correct! or Few2. I have to go to the supermarket. There isn\'t much coffee left. >>Correct!3. How many loaves of bread do we need? >>Correct!4. Would you like any milk? Yes please. Just a little. >>some, Correct!5.The land is not suitable for agriculture so some of the food is imported. >>Correct!

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