Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!Hope you are doing well today.
Thank you very much for taking the time to make your homework.I do appreciate the effort and time.
There is a big improvement on your sentence construction because you are trying to formulate very good sentences which shows that you are very eager to learn.There are no major problems on your sentences but you just need to work on the proper usage of words.I am happy to see such improvement in you.Keep up the good work.I will see you on our next class.
^^T.Winnie^^
1. note--> Please make a note of the dates.
>> Please take note of the dates./Please make a note for the dates.
2. error--> An error occurred when trying to start upload.
>> An error occurred when I was starting to upload it.
>> An error occurred when I was trying to upload something.
3. period--> Two years is not a short period.
>> Correct
4. next--> The next train to seoul is at ten.
>> The next train to Seoul is at ten.
>> or you may also indicate the time of the day
Example: The next train to Seoul is at 10 am/pm.
5. several-->I have night duty several times a month.
>> Correct
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