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Q.Where would you like to travel next? What would you like to do there
A. I\'d like to travel to Hawaii. Before I was young, I prefered big cities and famous and impressive area. However, now I prefer to nature area or small countryside. Hawaii has beautiful nature including the sky, the sea and tree so on.
I\'d like to study Hawaiii history as well. How Hawaii joined USA and aboriginal people as well.
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Good morning, Ji [이름]! I didn\'t now you like history. Actually, Hawaii is my dream destination too. I hope we can travel there in the future!-Faith-
Q.Where would you like to travel next? What would you like to do there>> CORRECT
A. I\'d like to travel to Hawaii.
>> CORRECT
Before I was young, I prefered big cities and famous and impressive area.
>> When I was young, I preferred big cities and famous and impressive area/place.
However, now I prefer to nature area or small countryside.
>> However, now I prefer to go to natural sites/places or small countryside.
Hawaii has beautiful nature including the sky, the sea and tree so on.
>> Hawaii has beautiful nature including the sky, the sea, trees and so on.
I\'d like to study Hawaiii history as well.
I\'d like to study Hawaiii history as well.
>> I\'d like to study Hawaiian history as well.
How Hawaii joined USA and aboriginal people as well.
>> For instance, how did the USA colonize Hawaii and the aboriginal people too?
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