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WRITING TASK: What do you think your life would be without your family?
I haven\'t imaged my life without my family. If I image it, my life must be lonely and simple. Because one of the most resaon that I laugh everyday is my children. I experience funny and exciting episodes with them. Forethermore, I feel love everyday thanks to my family.
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Wow! I am so touched by your answer, Ji [이름]! I am so glad that you are happy and contented because of your family. Take care!
-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What do you think your life would be without your family?>> CORRECT
I haven\'t imaged my life without my family.
>> I haven\'t imagined my life without my family.
If I image it, my life must be lonely and simple.
>> If I imagine it, my life must be lonely and simple.
Because one of the most resaon that I laugh everyday is my children.
>> Because, one of the most reasons that I laugh every day is my children.
I experience funny and exciting episodes with them.
>> I experience funny and exciting episodes with them.
Forethermore, I feel love everyday thanks to my family.
>> Furthermore, I feel loved every day, thanks to my family.
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