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2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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My teacher is veryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryvveryveryveryveryveryveryeryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveveryveryveryryveryveryveryverypveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryAtypical and my father to My nvention is Go haywire today I went to the picnic for museum^*^

강사 첨삭

Hi Alex! Thanks for dropping by to do your homework. Next time please refrain from typing too much \'very\' in your sentence- that is not just grammatically incorrect, it is also a nuisance. You can only use that word once in your sentence. Here are my corrections, review them. Good night. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ My teacher is very atypical and my father to >> My teacher and my father are both atypical.My nvention is Go haywire >> My invention went haywire.today I went to the picnic for museum^*^ >> Today I went to a picnic at the museum.

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