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Sorry, I'm late. ^^a
After studying, I just went to sleep.
Anyway my answer is written below
I want to have super power treatIng ice.
And I want to be called 'iceberg'.
because I feel the word 'iceberg' like to have very strong power!
How about you think that? :)
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mason! :)
Good afternoon!
Wow, the name \"Iceberg\' sounds like it has a great deal of power. kkk
I hope that you are not going to be a villain when you start using your super power.^^
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
See you later!
T. Alice ^^
Sorry, I\'m late. ^^a
>> correct! After studying, I just went to sleep.
>> correct! OR I just went to bed.^^
Anyway my answer is written below>> correct! I want to have super power treatIng ice.
>> I want to have an ice super power.^^
>> or: I want to have a super power in ice. And I want to be called \'iceberg\'.
>> And I want to be called the \"Iceberg\". because I feel the word \'iceberg\' like to have very strong power!
>> This is because I feel that the word \"iceberg\" has a very strong power.^^ How about you think that? :)
>> What do you think about that? :)
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