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2014-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Sorry, I'm late. ^^a After studying, I just went to sleep. Anyway my answer is written below I want to have super power treatIng ice. And I want to be called 'iceberg'. because I feel the word 'iceberg' like to have very strong power! How about you think that? :)

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Hi there Mason! :) Good afternoon! Wow, the name \"Iceberg\' sounds like it has a great deal of power. kkk I hope that you are not going to be a villain when you start using your super power.^^  Thanks for sharing your thoughts. See you later! T. Alice ^^ Sorry, I\'m late. ^^a >>  correct!  After studying, I just went to sleep. >>  correct! OR I just went to bed.^^  Anyway my answer is written below>>  correct! I want to have super power treatIng ice. >>  I want to have an ice  super power.^^ >> or: I want to have a super power in ice.  And I want to be called \'iceberg\'. >>  And I want to be called the \"Iceberg\".  because I feel the word \'iceberg\' like to have very strong power! >> This is because I feel that the word \"iceberg\" has a very strong power.^^ How about you think that? :) >>  What do you think about that? :)

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