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2010-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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I`m going to array my clothes. lots of sports are roots from the original sports. In greese,there is a state called Rome, it says"If you go to the Rome, you have to know rome laws." In 2008, there was a beijing olympics. I have a handful of candy. I like to play arm wrestling. I evolved a lot from before.

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Hi! Good day to you! Thank you for sending me your homework. Anyway, here are some corrections. Kindly review them. Have a wonderful day!   I`m going to array my clothes. >>correctlots of sports are roots from the original sports. >> A lot of sports were originally  rooted from other sports.In greese,there is a state called Rome, it says"If you go to the Rome,you have to know rome laws." >> In Italy, there is a state called Rome, it is said that “ If you go to Rome, you have to know the Roman laws.”In 2008, there was a beijing olympics. >>  The 2008  Beijing Olympics was held in Beijing. >>There was a Beijing Olympic Game last 2008.I have a handful of candy. >> CorrectI like to play arm wrestling. >> CorrectI evolved a lot from before. >> I evolved a lot into a better man.

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