Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I really appreciate your effort and enthusiasm during our class.
You were right it is better to keep quiet and listen.
Because if we keep quiet during the argument we can solve the problem.
Well enjoy the rest of your time okay!
Take care always.
~Teacher Chelsea
\"How do you avoid arguments?\"
When I argue with my relatives, to avoid fight, I endure words what I can say.
>> When I argue with my relatives to avoid fight, I endure words that I would like to say.
OR:
>> When I argue with my relatives to avoid fight, I keep the words that I would like to say.
First, I just listen.
>> Correct.
After, I start to conversation with my relatives.
>> After that, I start to have a conversation with my relatives.
Then, Other\'s angry voice is becoming soft.
>> Then my relative\'s angry voice become low pitch or soft.
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