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Home work for 9th of Jan

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 What do you usually do on your free time? 
 As you know, I have a different holiday against other people.

>>As you know, I have a different day off compared to other people.

Normally Their holidays are a Saturday and Sunday, But mine is Sunday and Monday.

>>Normally, their days off are Saturday and Sunday but mine are Sunday and Monday.

On Sunday I usually do the things for my social relations.

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OR>>On Sunday, I usually socialize.

I enjoy my free time hanging out with my friends.

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Or I visit museums and galleries for watching exhibitions which is part of my job and hobby.

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I can meet many artist and curators around there.

>>I can meet many artists and curators in these places.

 And on Monday, every body go to work.

>>And on Monday, everybody goes to work.

So It is not easy for me to meet someone.

>>So, it is not easy for me to meet someone.

I do the things related for myself. instead of hanging out such as examining my body at the hospital, getting a facial massage, visiting a book store, cleaning my room, going to shopping and so on.

>>Instead, I do my personal stuff like hanging out or having check up at the hospital, getting facial massage, visiting a book store, cleaning my room, shopping and so on.

 I think it is pretty well-balanced way to spend two day-off.

>>I think it is pretty well- balanced way to spend my two days off.