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2014-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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What influences you to make good choices? When I have to choice something among many choices. I gather advices of relatives. These advices make me to select good choices. especially elder people's advice affect good effect to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^


Good evening^^

I appreciate your effort in doing this.

Thanks for your time. I hope that in every decision that you make

it will always give you good effects. Have time to check my corrections for you.

Teacher Chelsea


What influences you to make good choices?

When I have to choice something among many choices.

 I gather advices of relatives.

>>When I have to choose something among many choices, I gather pieces of advice from my relatives.
 These advices make me to select good choices.

>> These pieces of advice give me the idea to make good choices.
 especially elder people\'s advice affect good effect to me.

>> I consider that  elder people\'s advice could affect and has good effect to me.

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