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Hello there,
Thank you so much for your time.
I am really happy that you did your homework for today.
I appreciate everything that you have shared about your homework.
Sometimes we really have to be careful when eating in restaurants\'.
I love eating delicious food but I also consider choosing restaurants.
Well enjoy the rest of your time.
Eat your dinner and please rest well.
~ Teacher Chelsea
What\'s the most disgusting food you have ever eaten in a restaurant?
I like sushi.
>> Correct
>> OR: I like eating sushi.
so, when some store which sell sushi open near my home I have to visit and eat sushi.
>> So, when some restaurants which serve sushi opened near my home I have to visit that restaurant and eat sushi.
several month ago, I visited new sushi store .
>> Several months ago, I visited new sushi restaurant.
I expected delicious flavor.
>> I expected delicious flavored sushi.
but some sushis have musty smell and dirty.
>> But some of their sushis\' have a musty smell and unsanitary.
after that time I never go there.
>> After that experience I never go there again.
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