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If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?
I am satisfied with my life.
But If I could change a choice in my life. I make better life than now.
When I high school student, I choose my university.
Some times, I think if I choose another chance, my life become better than now.
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How are you doing today?
You have a very inspiring topic, good job!
Keep it up and make it a habit to do your homework.
Appreciate that you have a very good outlook about your life.
Practice writing more.
Have a great day ahead!
Thank you and see you in class.
Teacher Chelsea.
If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?I am satisfied with my life.
>> Correct.
But If I could change a choice in my life. I make better life than now.
>> But if I have a chance to change my life, I would make it better.When I high school student, I choose my university.
>> When I was in high school, I chose my university.
>> OR: When I was a high school student, I chose my university.
>> OR: I chose my university when I was in high school.Some times, I think if I choose another chance, my life become better than now.
>> Sometimes, I think if I chose another chance my life would be better now.
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