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2014-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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If you could change anything in your life, what would it be? I am satisfied with my life. But If I could change a choice in my life. I make better life than now. When I high school student, I choose my university. Some times, I think if I choose another chance, my life become better than now.

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Hi there : ] How are you doing today? You have a very inspiring topic, good job! Keep it up and make it a habit to do your homework. Appreciate that you have a very good outlook about your life. Practice writing more. Have a great day ahead! Thank you and see you in class. Teacher Chelsea.   If you could change anything in your life, what would it be?I am satisfied with my life. >> Correct. But If I could change a choice in my life. I make better life than now. >> But if I have a chance to change my life, I would make it better.When I high school student, I choose my university. >> When I was in high school, I chose my university. >> OR: When I was a high school student, I chose my university. >> OR: I chose my university when I was in high school.Some times, I think if I choose another chance, my life become better than now. >> Sometimes, I think if I chose another chance my life would be better now.

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