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2014-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks? Why or why not? Nowdays, many people are concerned by cosmetic surgery. Because they believe that to enhance the appearance make thier life easier. But, I think to have a confidencek is more important than to have cosmetic surgery.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for always doing your homework^^ Kudos for you! I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. See you tomorrow! Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks? Why or why not?Nowdays, many people are concerned by cosmetic surgery. >> Nowadays, many people are concerned about cosmetic surgery.Because they believe that to enhance the appearance make thier life easier. >> Because they believe that enhancing their appearance can make their lives easier.But, I think to have a confidencek is more important than to have cosmetic surgery. >> But I think, having a confidence is more important than having a cosmetic surgery.

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