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Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections, please find time to review those.
I didn\'t know that your company is really far^^
Anyway, let\'s talk more about this in our class.
See you later^^
~T.Chelsea
In your viewpoint, what are the advantages and disadvantages of commuting?
In my case, my work is located so far from my home.
>> In my case, our company is located far from my house.
commuting is takes about 2hours by subway.
>> It takes about 2 hours commuting by subway.
It is long time If I just spend time to s[이름]p.
>> It takes a lot of time so I just spend my time on the train s[이름]ping.
But, If I use time to study something. that time can help to improve myself.
>> But if I use that time to study something, it would help me to improve myself.
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