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2014-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Do you believe in love at first sight? Why? Yes. I believe that because I have experience. When I fell in the first love, As I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he became my lover. and that came true. I believe that it is a miracle! unfortunately, that miracle doesn't maintain until now. And yet, I still believe in love at first sight.

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Good day!   I didn\'t think that you would believe in love at first sight. The more surprising thing is you have experienced it. Well, I am really amazed. Love at first sight is really possible. I have experienced it, too. However it is just for a short time. Hahaha.   Anyway, your composition is good. Keep it up! Enjoy your day!   Teacher Chelsea ^^       Do you believe in love at first sight? Why?Yes. I believe that because I have experience.>> Yes, I believe in love at first sight because I had an experience. >> OR: Yes, I believe in love at first sight since I have experienced it. When I fell in the first love, As I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he became my lover. and that came true. >> When I fell in love, the first time, as I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he would become my lover, and that came true. I believe that it is a miracle!>> Correct! unfortunately, that miracle doesn\'t maintain until now.>> Unfortunately, that miracle didn\'t continue. >> OR: Unfortunately, that miracle isn\'t existing now. And yet, I still believe in love at first sight. >> Correct! >> OR: However, I still believe in love at first sight.

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