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Do you believe in love at first sight? Why?
Yes. I believe that because I have experience.
When I fell in the first love,
As I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he became my lover.
and that came true. I believe that it is a miracle!
unfortunately, that miracle doesn't maintain until now.
And yet, I still believe in love at first sight.
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Good day!
I didn\'t think that you would believe in love at first sight.
The more surprising thing is you have experienced it.
Well, I am really amazed.
Love at first sight is really possible.
I have experienced it, too.
However it is just for a short time. Hahaha.
Anyway, your composition is good.
Keep it up! Enjoy your day!
Teacher Chelsea ^^
Do you believe in love at first sight? Why?Yes. I believe that because I have experience.>> Yes, I believe in love at first sight because I had an experience.
>> OR: Yes, I believe in love at first sight since I have experienced it.
When I fell in the first love, As I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he became my lover. and that came true.
>> When I fell in love, the first time, as I met my ex-boyfriend, I thought that he would become my lover, and that came true.
I believe that it is a miracle!>> Correct!
unfortunately, that miracle doesn\'t maintain until now.>> Unfortunately, that miracle didn\'t continue.
>> OR: Unfortunately, that miracle isn\'t existing now.
And yet, I still believe in love at first sight.
>> Correct!
>> OR: However, I still believe in love at first sight.
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