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What kinds of disasters are common in your country?
In Kangwondo which is city of Korea, heavy snow was fallen two weeks ago.
Snow was stacked over 3M.
So, many green houses have be collapsed and some people were harted and losted.
I hope to solve this disaster quickly.
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Hi there!
Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework. I appreciate your time and effort.
I also feel sorry for those affected by the disaster. It reminds me about the calamity we had November of last year.
It\'s really sad. Anyway, I hope everyone will recover from those disasters.
Have a sound s[이름]p tonight! :)
Here are my corrections:
What kinds of disasters are common in your country?
In Kangwondo which is city of Korea, heavy snow was fallen two weeks ago.
>>In Kangwondo, which is one of the cities in Korea, heavy snow had fallen two weeks ago.
Snow was stacked over 3M.
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Snow was 3M thick.
So, many green houses have be collapsed and some people were harted and losted.
>>So many greenhouses had collapsed and some people were hurt and lost.
I hope to solve this disaster quickly.
>>I hope this disaster will be solved quickly.
Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework. I appreciate your time and effort.
I also feel sorry for those affected by the disaster. It reminds me about the calamity we had November of last year.
It\'s really sad. Anyway, I hope everyone will recover from those disasters.
Have a sound s[이름]p tonight! :)
Here are my corrections:
What kinds of disasters are common in your country?
In Kangwondo which is city of Korea, heavy snow was fallen two weeks ago.
>>In Kangwondo, which is one of the cities in Korea, heavy snow had fallen two weeks ago.
Snow was stacked over 3M.
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Snow was 3M thick.
So, many green houses have be collapsed and some people were harted and losted.
>>So many greenhouses had collapsed and some people were hurt and lost.
I hope to solve this disaster quickly.
>>I hope this disaster will be solved quickly.
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