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2014-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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In fact, I studied by myself Japanese last year. I'm very interested in Japanese and my grandmother was born in Japan. But now I'm not studying Japanese because of Kanji(Chinese character). Of course, in Korea, a few people use it but it's too difficult for me to memorize and use. At first I thought Japanese was so easy but the more I knew, the more it was difficult. However I can read Hirakana, Gatakana and speak basic sentences.

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Hi there [이름]^^   Nowadays, Language has become a skill. The more languages you can speak or understand, it makes you more impressive and confident. English might be the most popular but speaking other dialects gives us a great push to belong to another culture. I\'m sure you would be very happy to use your knowledge if you go to Japan.^^   Great jod on your sentences today [이름]^^ Keep it up!^^   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you today:   In fact, I studied by myself Japanese last year. >> CORRECT OR> I self-studied Japanese last year.I\'m very interested in Japanese and my grandmother was born in Japan. >> CORRECT OR> I have an interest in Japanese and my Grandma was born in Japan.But now I\'m not studying Japanese because of Kanji(Chinese character). >> CORRECT OR> Kanji is one of the languages I\'m studying now.Of course, in Korea, a few people use it but it\'s too difficult for me to memorize and use. >> CORRECT OR> Some Koreans use it but it\'s challlenging to memorize and use.At first I thought Japanese was so easy but the more I knew, the more it was difficult. >> CORRECT OR> The more I learn it, the more that I think that it is difficult.However I can read Hirakana, Gatakana and speak basic sentences. >> CORRECT OR> I can manage to read Hirakana, Gatakana and a few useful phrases.

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