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If you could live under the ocean, would you want to?
If i could live under the ocean, i want to whale.
Because whale is very bic. And it is similar to me. ^^
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Hi there [이름]!
Oh! I also want to see a whale.Really? I don\'t think so.
I think you are really healthy and
You know what, my brother told me that I am as big as a whale. Hihihi!
So, it means I should be on a diet. Hahaha.
Let us talk more about this later in class.
Teacher Nina
If you could live under the ocean, would you want to?If i could live under the ocean, i want to whale.
>> If I could live under the ocean, I want to be a whale. Because whale is very bic.
>> Because the whale is very big. (Spelling check: big ^^)
And it is similar to me. ^^
>> Correct!
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