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Hi [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

Good job for today!

You made a very well-composed writing.

However, you still forgot some writing rules like capitalization, spacing and punctuations.

Please see the corrections and suggestions below.

Anyway, have a great evening! ^^

Teacher Nina

um.. I favorite Pizza Parlor is Mr. [Name](korea brand) and Dominos Pizza.
>> Um ... My favorite Pizza Parlor is Mr. [Name] (Korean shop) and Dominos Pizza. 
Mr. [Name] is less olily. and It is very clean taste.
>> Mr. [Name]\'s menu is less oilier, and it has very clean taste.
Dominos Pizza taste is similar to Mr. [Name]. but Dominos Pizza don\'t have stuffed crust Pizza. ㅜㅜ
>> Domino Pizza\'s menu tastes similar to Mr. [Name]\'s, but it doesn\'t have stuffed crust pizza.
I like stuffed crust pizza.^^
>> CORRECT!
Before i eat pizza, i tink calorie of pizza. but When i eat pizza, i forget calorie.^^

>> Before I eat pizza, I think of the amount of calories I can get from it, but when I eat it, I forget about the calorie.