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Good morning Mr. [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic.

Anyway, children should learn how to be independent from their parents once they are financially stable.

And parents should still be there to guide their children.
It also depends on someone\'s situation and maybe culture.

Since in your country, you have a different culture comparing to others when it comes to becoming independent from parents.

Thanks for your time Mr. [이름]!
See you later!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

In my case, as korean guys do, I had to complete a military service in the middle of studying at University.

>>  In my case, as Korean guys do, I had to complete a military service while  studying in the university.
 Of course, I had a part time job to make money.

>>  correct!

but, that money was too small to cover my schood fee.

>>  But that money is not enough to cover my school fees.
 Unavoidably, I had relied on my parents for a school fee.

>>  Unavoidably, I had to rely to my parents for a school fee
 After graduation, I was rushing to have a job.

>>  correct!

It was 27 years old.

>>  correct!

And, cause of losing my job, I had tough times, twice for 1 & half year.

>>  And because I lose my job, I had tough times twice in 1 and a half year.
 At that time, I got a financial support from my father, and, I could rent a house.

>>  correct! 

>> or: At that time, my father supported me financially so I was able to rent a house.
 On my 30 years old, I could acheive independence, financially.

>>  When I was 30 years old, I could achieve my independence, financially.
 Although I do not rely on my parents, financially, I can not say \'I separate my parents\', if I do not get married.

>>  correct!

>> or: Although I do not financially rely on my parents, I can not say that I am separated from my parents as long as I am not yet married.  
 So, after getting married, perfectly, we can stand alone without supports from parents.
>>  So after getting married, perfectly, we could stand alone without any support from our parents.
Nobody knows when someone decides his marriage.

>>  correct!

>> or: Nobody knows when someone wants to get married.

It is upto their life style.

>>  It is up to their lifestyle.