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Hello Mr. [이름]!
How are you doing?
Well, I do agree that our childhood is the happiest time of our lives.
We were once so young and innocent and no responsibilities at all.
Anyway, I\'ll see you again later.
Have a nice day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Absolutely..
>> correct!
Because they have not experienced, everything could be new to them.
>> correct!
>> or: Because they do not have any experiences and everything could be new to them.
No fear what they are making.
>> They have no fear of what they are doing.
Certainly, they are afraid of mom\'s scolding.
>> correct!
>> or: Certainly, they are afraid when their mom would scold them.
But, even they are giggling with mom\'s yell & purnishment.
>> They are even giggling when mom would yell or punish them.
And, they have a big & strong fence of parents, they do not feel any responsiblity.
>> do you mean: They have a big and strong defense from their parents, and they do not feel any responsibility.
So, they can be brave.
>> correct!
>> or: So they are brave.
But, they also have a headache & deeply consider how to cover their mistake from parents.
>> But, they also have a headache & deeply consider how to cover their mistakes from their parents.
At that time, their main issue is just how to avoid mom\'s scolding.
>> correct!
That is all.
>> correct!
But, as being an adult, we have to have a big responsibility for whatever we do.
>> But, being an adult, we have to have a big responsibility for whatever we are doing.
And, we do not want to make any troble, becase, we know how much we have to spend our energy to solve it, even with money.
>> correct! (trouble)
Also, we know that we can not rely on my parents, anymore, but they are ones of my care.
>> Also, as you know, I cannot rely on my parents anymore, since they are the ones under my care.
When I was a child, although, I was making all trobles in everyday, but, that time was the most happist period in my life.
>> When I was a child, although I was making a lot of troubles everyday, but that time was the happiest period of my life.
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