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2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes. 2. Tom played golf, while, Julie went shopping with her friends. 3. The family lived in Japan for three years. 4. Larry called his mother, while, Caroline was watching television. 5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.

강사 첨삭

Great afternoon Mr. [이름]!

This is just a piece of cake for you.

I am pretty sure of that. ^^

Anyway, see you later!

Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes.
>>  correct!
2. Tom played golf, while, Julie went shopping with her friends.
>>  correct! 
3. The family lived in Japan for three years.
>>  
correct! 
4. Larry called his mother, while, Caroline was watching television.
>>  
correct! 
5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.

>>  correct!

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