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And my last hello for today Mr. [이름].
What more can I say?
You have explained everything to me with your composition and by explaining it also during our class.
So I have understood clearly what you want to say.
See you then tomorrow!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Thirdly, I can expect some excuse to family.

>> Thirdly, I can expect some excuses to my family.

I may make many mistakes to my family, but, it can be covered by my family\'s affection.

>> correct!
 But, cause of my often excuse, it may hurts my family\'s emotion.

>> But because I often makes a lot of excuses, it may hurt my family\'s emotion.

And, Even I feel terrable about me as a part of my family, I can not leave my family.

>> And even if I feel terrible that I am a part of my family, I could not leave them.
 I may contral my role in my family, slowly & fastly by helping chores, being a son & brother.

>> I may control my role in my family, slowly and fast by helping chores, and being a son and a brother to my parents and siblings, respectively.  

Or, it could be a financial support.

>> correct!
 Anyway, as a part of my family, it should be the most important what I can not break or leave.

>> Anyway, as a part of my family, it should be the most important thing which I should not break or leave.

I should be faithful to my family with some excuse & free responsibility.

>> I should be faithful to my family with some excuses & free responsibility.
 But, the most important thing is that my family is my everything.

>> correct!