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2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Winnie

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1. My frieds and I saw a fabulous performance last weekend. 2. The official challenger for the world championship has not been seen in public. 3. We will be realxing on the beach during the summer vacation. 4. We have a vacancy in marketing department so please send us a referral. 5. There are lots of properties in a neiboring village.

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Hi [이름], Thank you for answering your first homework. You did great. Keep it up! ~Teacher Winnie~   1. My frieds and I saw a fabulous performance last weekend. >> CORRECT2. The official challenger for the world championship has not been seen in public.>> CORRECT 3. We will be realxing on the beach during the summer vacation.>> CORRECT 4. We have a vacancy in marketing department so please send us a referral. >> We have a job vacancy in marketing department so please send us a referral. 5. There are lots of properties in a neiboring village. >> CORRECT

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