Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
If possible, I want to be a my company president because I apply for the studying abroad funded by my company. My president chooses the proper candidate as a representative of company. If I were hime, I will select me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]!
Marvelous Monday to you :))
I hope you stay positive and energetic throughout the week :))
I do wish and pray that you\'ll be selected my dear.
I know you really want to grab this opportunity for you and your family.
Just do your best and put your heart into it :)
See you in class my dear~
Take care :)
_T.Myra_^^
CORRECTIONS:
If possible, I want to be a my company president because I apply for the studying abroad funded by my company.
>> If possible, I want to be the president of our company because I\'m applying to study abroad which funded by my company.
My president chooses the proper candidate as a representative of company.
>> My president chooses the proper candidate as a representative of our company.
If I were hime, I will select me.
>>If I were him, I will select myself.
Marvelous Monday to you :))
I hope you stay positive and energetic throughout the week :))
I do wish and pray that you\'ll be selected my dear.
I know you really want to grab this opportunity for you and your family.
Just do your best and put your heart into it :)
See you in class my dear~
Take care :)
_T.Myra_^^
CORRECTIONS:
If possible, I want to be a my company president because I apply for the studying abroad funded by my company.
>> If possible, I want to be the president of our company because I\'m applying to study abroad which funded by my company.
My president chooses the proper candidate as a representative of company.
>> My president chooses the proper candidate as a representative of our company.
If I were hime, I will select me.
>>If I were him, I will select myself.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.