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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!

Well, that was quite a composition.
Are you angry or against your government? ^^__^^ (just asking)

Anyway, I have seen, heard, and read in the news about the Pope\'s visit in your country and how he gave strong message to the people in your country.

He really is a very great leader and a very humble one.

He is different from the leaders before.

And hopefully leaders from different countries would imitate him.

See you later then Mr. [이름].

Always,

Kathrine ^^

The pope Francis has visited to KOREA.

>> Pope Francis has visited Korea.

His visiting became a sensation, and because, he showed how to lead people, we jubilated him.

>> His visit became a sensation and because he showed how to lead the people, we jubilate him.

It was a syndrome, and really, he taught what is a leadership by his action with heart.

>> It was like a syndrome and he really taught what leadership is through his actions.

What he shows to us, is love.

>> He showed us love.

Well, we are only looking for a good leader.

>> correct!

And, by getting worse, we are always blaming and judging the leaders.

>> And the worse, we always blame and judge our leaders.

>> or: And the worse, we are always blaming and judging our leaders.

Finally, we say that we do not have a good leader.

>> correct!

But, before we criticize leaders, we must think how much we are generous to the others, who needs help.

>> But before we criticize our leaders,  we must think how much are we generous to others and to those who need help.

People want to get vicarious satisfaction through the public figures, who are influential.

>> correct!

Why people are just trying to get a good position & running for the top class.

>> Why are people trying to get a good position and running to be at the top of the class?

After getting their goal, what they have something remained.

>> What remains to them after getting their goal?

After being a successor, do they feel any responsiblity for what they criticized, before?

>> After being a successor, do they feel any responsibility for what they have criticized, before?

They are just hiding under the group of the leaders & the public figures.

>> correct!

If all normal people can bright their place, the world will brighten.

>> If all normal people can brighten their place, the world will brighten too.