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Good afternoon once again Mr. [이름]!
Are these you standards to have your future wife?
Well, I agree that compatibility is important between husband and wife.
There would be a problem if the two of your are not compatible with each other.
But we have this saying, \"Opposites attracts.\"
We do not know what future brings but I wish you luck in finding your partner in life.
Thanks again for today!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Although, the skin\'s color & culture are different, but, I think that all human life is similar how to live.
>> Although, the skin color & culture are different, but, I think that all human are the same on how we lived our life.
So, I think that my life would not change, much.
>> correct!
>> So I think that my life would not change a lot.
But, I should fit myself to her, as much as I can.
>> correct!
Because, both of life styles are slghtly different.
>> Because both of our lives are slightly different.
Or, it could be big different, I should pay attention more to understand my spouse.
>> Or, there could be a big difference. I should pay more attention to understand my spouse.
All people may have same aim, like a prosperous life, and well living.
>> All people may have the same aim, like having a prosperous life, and a well living.
But, I want to focus on how to live and share our life together, well.
>> But I want to focus on how to live and share our life together very well.
For example, I like to go to church on Sunday, but, she prefer to stay the whole night in a pub or a club for drinking & dancing.
>> For example, I like to go to the church on Sunday, but, she prefers to stay the whole night in a pub or a club for drinking & dancing.
We can not match each other.
>> We are not match for each other.
I just hope that she and I have similar life style, common goals and hobbies, which we can share together.
>> correct!
And, if we can understand each other with open mind, it would be no problem.
>> And, if we can understand each other with an open mind, there would be no problem.
If she has a very positive attitude to life, I have nothing to desire.
>> If she has a very positive attitude to life, there is nothing I would desire.
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