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2014-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Although, the skin's color & culture are different, but, I think that all human life is similar how to live. So, I think that my life would not change, much. But, I should fit myself to her, as much as I can. Because, both of life styles are slghtly different. Or, it could be big different, I should pay attention more to understand my spouse. All people may have same aim, like a prosperous life, and well living. But, I want to focus on how to live and share our life together, well. For example, I like to go to church on Sunday, but, she prefer to stay the whole night in a pub or a club for drinking & dancing. We can not match each other. I just hope that she and I have similar life style, common goals and hobbies, which we can share together. And, if we can understand each other with open mind, it would be no problem. If she has a very positive attitude to life, I have nothing to desire.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon once again Mr. [이름]!

Are these you standards to have your future wife?

Well, I agree that compatibility is important between husband and wife.

There would be a problem if the two of your are not compatible with each other.

But we have this saying, \"Opposites attracts.\"

We do not know what future brings  but I wish you luck in finding your partner in life.

Thanks again for today!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Although, the skin\'s color & culture are different, but, I think that all human life is similar how to live.

>> Although, the skin color & culture are different, but, I think that all human are the same on how we lived our life.

So, I think that my life would not change, much.

>> correct! 

>> So I think that my life would not change a lot.
 But, I should fit myself to her, as much as I can.

>> correct!

Because, both of life styles are slghtly different.

>> Because both of our lives are slightly different.

Or, it could be big different, I should pay attention more to understand my spouse.

>> Or, there could be a big difference. I should pay more attention to understand my spouse.
 All people may have same aim, like a prosperous life, and well living.

>> All people may have the same aim, like having a prosperous life, and a well living.

But, I want to focus on how to live and share our life together, well.

>> But  I want to focus on how to live and share our life together very well.
 For example, I like to go to church on Sunday, but, she prefer to stay the whole night in a pub or a club for drinking & dancing.

>> For example, I like to go to the church on Sunday, but, she prefers to stay the whole night in a pub or a club for drinking & dancing.

We can not match each other.

>> We are not match for each other.
 I just hope that she and I have similar life style, common goals and hobbies, which we can share together.

>> correct!

And, if we can understand each other with open mind, it would be no problem.

>> And, if we can understand each other with an open mind, there would be no problem.

If she has a very positive attitude to life, I have nothing to desire.

>> If she has a very positive attitude to life, there is nothing I would desire.

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