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2014-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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1. I am as tall as my homeroom teacher 2. She is as smart as my Science knowledge. 3. She is as pretty as my freind's face I appreciate your comments! I can study English easy!

강사 첨삭

A wonderful day to you Amy! ^^ Good job in your homework. ^^ If you notice the corrections, I just omitted some words. You are wonderful in constructing sentences but sometimes, you tend to overthink your sentences when you can actually use fewer words to express yourself. You are doing fantastic overall as one of my most intelligent students, keep it up! ^^   Wishing you all the best, Teacher Charlie.   1. I am as tall as my homeroom teacher >> CORRECT2. She is as smart as my Science knowledge. >> She is as smart as me. >> OR: She knows as much as me in Science.3. She is as pretty as my freind\'s face>> She is as pretty as my friend. >> OR: Her face is as pretty as my friend\'s face.I appreciate your comments!I can study English easy!

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