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Good morning again Mr. [이름]!
I totally agree with the situation that you have given.
I have students who are so young and their mothers are pushing them to study though they do not have the motivation to do so.
Honestly, I am pissed off by that but I also pity my young students.
They have to study not because they want it but because they are forced to do it.
To have a good foundation of studying another language, the mother tongue should be learn first before going to another thing.
When I was young, I did not have the interest to learn English.
Honestly speaking, I got interested to learn English when I went to college since my major is English language and literature.
Anyway, see you later then!
Have a great day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I used to regret that I should have studied English, earlier.
>> correct!
>> or: I used to regret that I did not study English when I was younger.
So, I think that a kid is faster to learn English than an adult.
>> correct!
>> or: So I think that it is faster for a kid to learn English than an adult.
But, if they are forced to learn it without their own intention, they would feel tired to lean it.
>> correct! (learn)
>> or: But if they are just forced to learn it against their will, they would feel tired learning it.
Or, they may quit learning it.
>> correct!
>> or: Or they would quit learning.
If they can practice it with a good English educational environment, it would be much better.
>> correct!
>> or: It would be better if they could practice it in a good English educational environment.
In my case, I felt needs to learn English by time goes.
>> In my case, I felt the need to learn English as time goes by.
So that I have been studying it by needs.
>> So I have been studying it because I need it.
Luckly, I have a good father who are trying to make a good educational environment for English learning.
>> Luckily, I have a good father who is trying to make a good educational environment for my English learning.
So, it helped me a lot, and made me learn it, easily.
>> correct!
We may need to study it to get a good job in Korea.
>> correct!
>> or: It seems like we need to study it to have a good job in Korea.
So, we are willing to have a patience such a hard practice, even if it is hard to excercise and acheive a good skill.
>> So we are willing to have patience to practice it hard to be able to achieve good English skills.
Because we need it, we can put up with hard time.
>> Because we need it, we can put up with the hard times.
>> or: Because we need it, we would be capable of surviving the hard times when it comes to learning English.
In fact, I did not feel to learn English, when I was young.
>> In fact, I did not feel the need to learn English when I was young.
So, I think that it is hard to give a motive to a kid why they start to learn it, when they are young.
>> So I think that it is hard to give motivation to little kids why they should start to learn it whey they are still young.
But, if we could give a kid a situation to speak English, naturally, they would learn it faster and better than an adult.
>> correct!
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