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2014-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I used to regret that I should have studied English, earlier. So, I think that a kid is faster to learn English than an adult. But, if they are forced to learn it without their own intention, they would feel tired to lean it. Or, they may quit learning it. If they can practice it with a good English educational environment, it would be much better. In my case, I felt needs to learn English by time goes. So that I have been studying it by needs. Luckly, I have a good father who are trying to make a good educational environment for English learning. So, it helped me a lot, and made me learn it, easily. We may need to study it to get a good job in Korea. So, we are willing to have a patience such a hard practice, even if it is hard to excercise and acheive a good skill. Because we need it, we can put up with hard time. In fact, I did not feel to learn English, when I was young. So, I think that it is hard to give a motive to a kid why they start to learn it, when they are young. But, if we could give a kid a situation to speak English, naturally, they would learn it faster and better than an adult.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Mr. [이름]!
I totally agree with the situation that you have given.

I have students who are so young and their mothers are pushing them to study though they do not have the motivation to do so.
Honestly, I am pissed off by that but I also pity my young students.

They have to study not because they want it but because they are forced to do it.

To have a good foundation of studying another language, the mother tongue should be learn first before going to another thing.

When I was young, I did not have the interest to learn English.
Honestly speaking, I got interested to learn English when I went to college since my major is English language and literature.

Anyway, see you later then!

Have a great day ahead!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


I used to regret that I should have studied English, earlier.

>>  correct!

>> or: I used to regret that I did not study English when I was younger.

So, I think that a kid is faster to learn English than an adult.

>>  correct! 

>> or: So I think that it is faster for a kid to learn English than an adult.
 But, if they are forced to learn it without their own intention, they would feel tired to lean it.

>>  correct!  (learn)

>> or: But if they are just forced to learn it against their will, they would feel tired learning it.

Or, they may quit learning it.

>>  correct!

>> or: Or they would quit learning.

If they can practice it with a good English educational environment, it would be much better.

>>  correct! 

>> or: It would be better if they could practice it in a good English educational environment.
 In my case, I felt needs to learn English by time goes.

>>  In my case, I felt the need to learn English as time goes by.

So that I have been studying it by needs.

>>  So I have been studying it because I need it.

Luckly, I have a good father who are trying to make a good educational environment for English learning.

>>  Luckily, I have a good father who is trying to make a good educational environment for my English learning.

So, it helped me a lot, and made me learn it, easily.

>>  correct!
 We may need to study it to get a good job in Korea.

>>  correct!

>> or: It seems like we need to study it to have a good job in Korea.

So, we are willing to have a patience such a hard practice, even if it is hard to excercise and acheive a good skill.

>>  So we are willing to have patience to practice it hard to be able to achieve good English skills.

Because we need it, we can put up with hard time.

>>  Because we need it, we can put up with the hard times. 

>> or: Because we need it, we would be capable of surviving the hard times when it comes to learning English.
 In fact, I did not feel to learn English, when I was young.

>>  In fact, I did not feel the need to learn English when I was young.

So, I think that it is hard to give a motive to a kid why they start to learn it, when they are young.

>>  So I think that it is hard to give motivation to little kids why they should start to learn it whey they are still young.

But, if we could give a kid a situation to speak English, naturally, they would learn it faster and better than an adult.

>>  correct!

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